Tuesday, February 18, 2014

Poem "ten outta ten"

Bing bang
ballah Kow Zo.
You know what I know
and I don't grow
flowers.
Ooh aah
so unique.
So progress
So mystique.
Mystique wasn't used right.
what a shame.
If I were famous
This would probably 
be much more expensive.
Let's make a price.
But but but
You will soon forget
All this and that
the CIA funded modern art to combat communism.
Never mind that was a joke.
No it wasn't.
Gaude Mater Polonia
is the only Polish phrase I know
God bless the Poles
May they always show
True true Polish courage
Teutons be mad.


This poem, titled "ten outta ten", used Assonance, Cacophony, Onomatopoeia, and Anaphora.

3 comments:

  1. Your poem was very strange and interesting. Keep up the good work.

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  2. Parker, this is a very creative poem. Is the only anaphora you repeating know?

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  3. I Love your poem Parker! When you write I can hear the words like you are reading it. You really know how to put your personality into your paper. Good job!

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